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as a firm believer in each stage of a drawing being able to stand on its own i have one very small crit: on your figure outline, vary the line weight more in areas you want to add a little extra emphasis or pop: her hips, sections of her inner and outer thighs, the down curve of her shoulders etc. i wouldn't change it on this but its something to think about for the future and is one of the things that will start to set you apart.
keep up the good work
-J.
yeah i saw that most of the black lines were taken out in the colors. i always like to think in terms of final end result(colors) and the after the fact resale of the art(to collectors)
keep up the good work!
-J.